the story so far

ok so this is my story so far in a quick nutshell as i took pernicious anemia and simplified it as much as possible so its easier for kids to understand and so i thought simplicity is the best option for this audience.

so pernicious anemia is simply put where the blood cells become too large and they cant leave the bone marrow to enter into the blood stream. and so i took this and thought of an idea.

the bone marrow can be the home.

the blood stream can be where all the blood cells get together and have fun.

the blood cells can be the charcaters and they can be like children.

and pernicious anemia will be the evil enermy which makes the blood cells bigger so they cant leave the bone marrow.

this then has a hidden meaning.

whilst your a small child you have a lot of freedom but as you become older and bigger you lose all of the freedom you have, so enjoy being a child whilst you still can. and i believe this can help with my story as most of the adults i know all the say the same thing and what they would do to be a child again.

and of course the hero who beats the villain, which is vitamin B12 which i have to try and think up a name for.

anyway on with my story in a nutshell.

we see the red blood cells in the bone marrow and the red blood cells leave the marrow and join the rest of their friends in the blood stream, but along comes the evil pernicious anemia with his super sizer ray, which he uses to make the blood cells bigger, the blood cells think this is great being bigger and older but they then realise they cant leave the bone marrow and become upset, the blood stream then gets thinner and we dont see as many red blood cells in the blood stream. then along comes the hero vitamin B12 who beats the evil pernicious anemia and saves the red blood cells who then return to their normal size and leave the bone marrow to join all their friends again, but we see the evil pernicious anemia hasnt been destroyed but just weakened, and this story can then continue on as a cycle and starts all over again so if the story is repeated it shows the cycle in which pernicious anemia has to be treated over and over and never goes away.

im working on the story as we speak to come up with a completed version but this gives a basic overview of my project.